You need to have better voice in your writing.
The influences need to be longer and more detailed.
I think that the influences could be more detailed. It didn't say much on how she influenced people but overall great blog.
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You need to have better voice in your writing.
ReplyDeleteThe influences need to be longer and more detailed.
ReplyDeleteI think that the influences could be more detailed. It didn't say much on how she influenced people but overall great blog.
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